A contribution to Ronovan’s decima challenge 334. Stable being the tricky rhyme on rhyme line D. Greedily, I have made two this week.
Tripping with the Magi
Three Magi travelled from the East,
beyond the land of Palestine,
beyond the Dead Sea's viscous brine,
each carried on a hump-backed beast.
Each one of them, some kind of priest,
bearing gifts from a Persian king
as if it were a christening;
carried straightway to a stable,
witnessing the birth of fable;
miraculous Lord of the Ring.
Power Tower
When Babylonians aspired
to build a temple touching sky
a certain god asked questions why,
from where such hubris was acquired.
She said 'It's not what I desired,
demolish, scatter all the stones,
make sure each one of you atones
for mocking me; it's unstable,
damn this Leaning Tower of Babel.'
(Off stage: hear polyglottal groans....)
We view these events very differently, but I enjoyed you technical use of rhyme and meter.
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Thanks Frank, it’s appreciated.
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Excellent both, love them 💜
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Thank you. Glad you like them.
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I really did 💜
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